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The teenage slut (the begining) reviews
Posted by great big dick
This is great story can't wait for grade 10 and see what she'll do next or who
Posted by archaic
* Abysmal. That is a word that meeans bad. Really Bad.
* Ninth grade girls are not usually 16.
* 36DD, on a freshman, it galls me enough that so many erotic story writers in these forums need to reduce all descriptions of females to numbers; could we at least try some original numbers.
* Cohesion. That is a word that means logical, organized, and well crafted. You story has no cohesion.
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