Posted by great big dick This is great story can't wait for grade 10 and see what she'll do next or who
Posted by archaic * Abysmal. That is a word that meeans bad. Really Bad.
* Ninth grade girls are not usually 16.
* 36DD, on a freshman, it galls me enough that so many erotic story writers in these forums need to reduce all descriptions of females to numbers; could we at least try some original numbers.
* Cohesion. That is a word that means logical, organized, and well crafted. You story has no cohesion.
My name's Kimmi and I used to be a stripper. I'm a genetic girl, and I always had a wild streak. Guys liked me 'cause of my long blond hair, slender build, and sense of humor. They also liked my 36C breasts :) ...