Posted by ac sorry, but this story pissed me off. wat kind of a 20 yr old uses the word 'fanny'? i think i might of wen i was three mate ;-)
Posted by kb this story was great and don't worry about the first message posted by ac. I thought it was great and it made me wet. you know what to write and i hope to see more stories in the future.
Posted by Tammy I loved both parts of this story, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
continue it! I cannot wait to see what happens next! If you are having writer's block, and would like some
help, please feel feel to let me know.
Posted by Tallulah Wow, this is a hot story! One of the better written ones on this site. Some of the stories here are laughable! The grammar and spelling is pathetic. But your story is quite imaginative, entertaining and very well-written. I hope to see more from you in the future.