Posted by Felicia Harper (Peter Palmer, hmm? Why not Jenn Ataelia?) The Fell Harper salutes you. This was a great story. Because you are recounting it like a memoir (IS it a memoir, I wonder? I could pretty much believe this really happened) the descriptions work, so for once I won't tell you what I've told everyone else so far. I like how you portray Lynne as sexy and confident, rather than passive or crude and loud. It's obvious she's having fun, that she wants everyone else to have a good time, but that she's in control of herself. I also like how the boys all treat her so well afterward. You almost make me want to be in her shoes. A well-conceived, believable story that is thoroughly enjoyable. The Fell Harper gives you ten out of ten orgasms (makes you wonder if she ever goes to 11).
Posted by Kimmer i want to be her! too bad things like this don't happen in the real world....or do they?
Posted by jmg4051 Enjoyable
Posted by dezrtrasr Very well written! I enjoyed the class and eroticism.
Posted by SEVERUSMAX A little too domineering and prima donna a girl for my tastes, plus the hypocrisy of acting like they weren't gang-banging her, but otherwise, it was quite sensual.