Posted by LucOuarm The setting was a bit far-fetched, but the story was excellent, even if it left someone hanging.
Posted by joe that story was fucking sick
Posted by sandy i liked it!
Posted by stilllldillll I liked the story. The teasing aspect was well done. Easy to follow and I wanted to keep reading it. well done.
Posted by Ricky oh yeah, Hayley can be my nurse anytime!!!!!!
Posted by darlene thanks a lot guys, for your reviews. joe, what made u find it sick? if u'd tell me, i'll try to improvise on my next stories. or did u find it sick just like that?
Posted by ken although almost always disinterested in tales that are so far fetched there can be no chance whatsoever for even partial potential, i found this story enjoyable. the disease and treatment obviously had no validity whatsoever; the sexual teasing of this poor soul by a buxom beauty was very captivating.
i really would have liked this to continue for one more chapter.
very enticing giving the reader real time empathy.
Posted by ray lovely story, want to know more, what happened after that, tell us about the kissing and fucking too.