old,fat,middle aged men probably will! so congratulations for writing a story that i could tell, was gonna be like most of the crap people post on here!
Posted by cc_meg Dear Jess,
I'm sorry you didn't like my story. This was my first one, and it actually really happened. Do you think it would be better if I made stuff up?
Posted by ac the one thing i really do hate about this world is sterotyping.
old, fat, middle aged men?
my girlfriends father happens to be a man, he's also middle aged, and is also, slightly over weight. he is also the most fantastic man i have ever known. having grown up with the father i did, i've never had any liking for guys, but this one in particular, i adore.
so basically what i'm trying to say, is watch what you type, because there is a good chance it isn't always true.
and i, personally, enjoyed this story, i found it very well written and look for the next part of the series.
ac.
and one other thing, how can someone be old and middle aged at the same time?
Posted by biznatch on wheels I felt the build up was excellent. Not every good story has to be about love or committment. As long as you have a plot and a brain, i most certainly will applaud you. good job
Posted by liz cute, cute. and go Tauruses! :). but keep building up the characters, and don't just land them drunk in heat in round 2, k?
Posted by Jess OHH shit ac that was harsh considering i never even wrote that! look at the e-mail ive obviously pissed someone off, anyone can write something on here and put a name to it,i dont have anything against fat middle aged men either,i mean i couldent, that would mean i was cusin my dad, and my uncle.
so i will watch what i type in future but obviously i have no control over what someone else puts on here.
Posted by Zac Stop, get over it so what if someone wrote something u never there could possibly be someone else on this fuking website whose call'd jess!
your probably dented for life now arnt you!
i think this story was crap and i aggred with the first rewiew
so err just get a life will ya!
Posted by Jess ERR, what exactly is your problem!im just sorting somthing out, wouldent you be pissed of if someone wrote something under your name!and yes, there probably is someone else on the website called jess, but ac thought its was me so im just clearing something up,and if you have a problem with that you need help!
i havnt read this story yet, and if you dont like it fine, everyone has their opinon,
i just really dont get how your so angry but i strongly belive you are the one who needs a life!
Posted by For Fucks Sake for crying out fuckin' loud...these reviews are suppose to be about the STORY not about STUPID DRAMA BULLSHIT....
story wasn't bad, needs a lil work...just keep at it