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Fucking in McDonalds reviews
Posted by Trysha G
What can i say about this story.. about the same thing i could say about the food at McDonalds..
Posted by Shadow
hmmm this one was left under the heat lamps for to short a time.just a rushed excuse to throw in a bad sex scene.try harder next time
Posted by Saddam Hussein
Too short!! Tell us the "after" story
Posted by Jimmy johnson
Good luck.
Posted by David
Way way way way too short. Put more detail.
Posted by robert arrington
now you know where the secret sauce cums from....lmao
Posted by ac
hmmm. ok.
Posted by Billy Kirkpatrick
sorry mate i have to agree with the other peeps. this story could of had serious potential but was rushed, too short, and not enough detail. its like some of my first drafts, keep trying and good luck
Posted by virginboy
This by far is the funniest story on this archive. I actually busted out laughing at my computer during the part where he says, "we
looked at each other like we were hungry for each other". Folks, this is why I don't eat fast food.
Posted by boy
If you are hungry eat a burger and maybe some fries.
Posted by your a dumb ass bitch needing to learn how to write a story
it sucked ass you dumb ass mother fucking bitch learn how to write a fucking sex story dumb ass bitch
Posted by kitten kat
wot a waste of time
Posted by Heywood Jablomee
The reviews are more entertaining than the story. Good luck with your next story, you have a lot of improving to do.
Posted by Sarah Williams
all i have to say is that it sucked
Posted by gopal
the story is to short,there is no hot sex.the person who wrote this story have to improve a lot.
Posted by babycak18
this story really sucked...it just didnt have enough detail to it..DONT READ IT!!!!!!
Posted by Do Da De
This kinda sucks... but it reminds me of my sister.. she works at mcdonalds and she's having an affair with her co-worker...
Posted by Kipp
It was short, maybe too short, um...like the fact it was at mc.donalds...now I wont eat there ever again. LMAO
Posted by the master of sex stories
mcdonalds... u need a better setting. Detail from 1-10... i say 2. u need to describe ur setting (although McDonalds doesnt cut it) and describe the sexual experience. Good potential-- but kinda hard to extend on something so vague. Need some work, but i guess after a while, you should get better!
Posted by vinay
please tell how You Can Fuck With Me
Posted by Fuck you
That was dumb as fuck!
Posted by steve
howdy Ya! my name is steve. and i work at the LA Mcdonalds on 5th street. i once fucked the shit out of this one guy in the back counter. it was great. he was taking my nine incher like nothing.
Posted by tere ko kya lena hai
bhanchod kya tuchu story thi
Posted by shabdkumar
nice story though 2 short
Posted by yuvi
asshole
Posted by yuvi
asshole
Posted by Bob
What aload of shit, put abit of L-BO grease into your next one.
Posted by ben
well it was ok
Posted by steve
Never turne me on at all try again mate that was rubbish
Posted by Terry
the story needs more detail and needs more of a twist the 2 need to continue the fucking after they quit in the car or at 1 of their apartments
Posted by ken
why the plentiful number of reviews as to a story so utterly juvenile and most likely from a 16 year old with f.a.s.
it must be the title that intrigues some......maybe.
are there any straight adults who peruse this site or is everyone latently homosexual? why not make it the story of burger king so you can tell us 36 times with great gusto that it is the home of the whopper?
this honestly is 6th grade level writing from a child who probably has no idea of the state he lives in........"ahhhhhh......brown lake trailer park......."
Posted by BbyGrlMJ25
too short, but alright. It's a real good start tho.
Posted by i hate u
that has 2 be the dumbest fucking story ever u probaly some dumb asshole who thought writing a story with a cathy name would be funny but its the dumbest fucking story ever do us a favor and never EVER FUCKING write again
Posted by kevin
I bet u guys made those fries extra salty
Posted by willie
sad, way too short, no depth to the story at all.did this person ever stay awake in english class?
Posted by karan
nice one
Posted by dhcd
That was sooo weak
Posted by John
Give Up!
Posted by Bob Sonic
that was so retarded its not even good
Posted by sophita
its a boring story all together
Posted by jess
too short! man..it was fucken dumb. it didnt even make me wet dude!
Posted by tight pussy
fuck me fuck me that was SEXY
Posted by kadal
Very very nice
Posted by Becky
that is a very interesting story.:)
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