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Posted by you suck
You definitly are a "good" writer. On the other hand, that is the most disgusting story I've ever read. Even worse than incest. Nothing is excting about raping a girl, especially if she is in that much pain. I do understand warped people do get extremely aroused by such things, but you need to seek help. You are one sick mother fucker. Oh and most of all....you need to get a fucking life. I mean geez what do you do all day? Sit around on your sorry loser ass and write rubbish like this all day??? Chapter 8!!?? LMFAO
Posted by Powerone
The warped people have nominated this story for an award this year for the Best Serial story.
From the sorry ass loser writing this story, Powerone.
Posted by someone
I enjoy reading about S&M, but stories like these are a far cry from the way it's done in real life. In real life, the submissive ALWAYS, ALWAYS gets to stop the scenario if something goes wrong or if he/she feels pain. The point is to use pain as a stimulus for *pleasure*, and there are lots of medical reasons why it works. S&M is supposed to be safe, sane and consensual. Personally, I'd like to read a realistic S&M story more than these exaggerated and dehumanizing stories of humiliation. Still, well-written.
Posted by You Wish
Do you make sure that you write "2003 Golden Clitorides Nominated Best Serial Story" before and after each and every paragraph? Yes, you may be a good writer, but that is completely irrelevant to the fact that you are a dillusional prick. You are the type of sicko that will go out and rape women for the sheer pleasure it brings. Know that you are a disgusting piece of garbage on a testosterone power trip. Oh, and by the way, Have a nice day!
Posted by Powerone
And by the way. Chapter 8 was the highest rated story in the Anal category on Literoitca for May 2003.
You might look up the word Fantasy and Reality and see if you can differentiate the two.
Have a nice day!
Posted by dripping wet
this was a great story. keep up the good writing. i love you stories. i was just curious is there a part 9 yet?
Posted by dripping wet
this was a great story. keep up the good writing. i love you stories. i was just curious is there a part 9 yet?
Posted by ASFDSDF
hi..i likek the chapter 8 most.but plz plz give some relief to rachel.ha ha ha ha ha.relief means get her fucked by deena........SHE WOULD HAVE TO BE FUCKED BY A GIRL..............GET HER SOON
Posted by ASDASD
THIS IS A GREA STORY .PLZ PLZ WRITE THE CHAPTER 9 AMD MAKE THE STORY DIFFERENT BY MAKING RACHEL TO BE FUCKED BY DEENA
Posted by ShyB
I really don't know why some people get all frustrated by reading your stories. I love your writings they show how intuned with creativity you are to make such interesting stories.
You should write a book... just my suggestion, I'd definatly read it.
Keep Writing, from possibly your number 1 fan!
Posted by ajurfhas
i honestly dont understand why this story was nominated for best serial story. The structure was terrible, you endlessly repeated words and phrases, and it was absolutely disgusting. heaven forgive you, ya sick crazy bastard.
Posted by ajurfhas
also, someone is absolutely right, this story is a far cry from realistic.
Posted by iuy
WRITE MORE SOON PLZZZZZZZZZZZZ.GREAT WRITER U ARE....DONT MIND CRITICISM WRITE MORE
Posted by Cheng Rosery Mao
Um...Powerone, this story was certainly disturbing yet it gave me some pleasure in chapters 1-4 but once I got to 8 I personally think u went a little to far. but yet I do not mean to criticize, it was a good story all around. I hope you actually do some consenual sex later on, I hate rape and always will hate it(even though i've never tried it) I just think it's kinda wrong to rape someone for your own pleasures...But yet I hope you do some actual non-rape chapters... as I quote about how sickening this was I hope you become a great writer in literature, "Necrophilia: Puts a new meaning to the phrase,"Crack open a cold one!"" ---From: Cheng Rosery Mao
P.S. I am a great fan of your literature skills
Posted by WHOA there....
Normally I really like to read your stories they are rough with the girls but they NEVER go to this sort of extreme, and this extreme was horrid- it was good until Chapter 8. Not only did I stop feeling all pleasure, I got the mad urge to vomit... please please please never go that far again and please don't post another story with anal as brutal as that- i love your writing but this upset me.
Posted by Nichole
To everybody who says this story is disturbing and upsetting and who disagrees with Powerone's style/subject of writing, I personally take his stories from the perspective of roleplay. Who's to say that what's happening isn't consensual? Living in a D/s lifestyle myself as a sub, when I roleplay with my lover I become totally immersed in the character and situation, and that adds to the pleasure.. just because Powerone doesn't write out that it's a roleplay between consenting people and doesn't write out the "real life non-roleplay" parts doesn't mean you have to take it as OMG HE'S SUPPORTING RAPE. Rape fantasies exist, and plenty of people get off on pleasure from pain. Honestly, who the hell are any of you to tell people that their sexual tastes are weird or wrong if trully it is hurting no one? Way to be ignorant you all. Anyway though, nice story Powerone, I really enjoyed it.
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