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A Sin Come True reviews

Posted by LucOuarm
So what... you made an effort. I think that you need to do some more organizational work and learn how to handle dialogue. This looks like a first draft, one that needed a few more hours of work.
Posted by David
i liked the story to it was good you should maybe write a part 2 like your old friends find out you maried your old teacher. or somthign like that
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