Posted by Heather im sorry, but if you are going to submit a story then the characters names should be the same through out. What was the girls name? Nadine or noreen? or do you even know? Really, i think that you should use a spell checker. Maybe try again later.
Posted by will what can i say this story is just sick
Posted by Dan Sick, very poor, and just dumb all the way around. Sorry to say, if you want to be a writer for a living, you better find a cardboard box that will hold up in winter.
Posted by alexaa what else can i say besides sick
Posted by bollox you are one sick fuck
Posted by shagnasty my my you try to please us and disgust us with your story but you fail miserably you should be locked up you dirty cunt shame on you for bringing incest and shit into a great pastime