Posted by ac very nice story, keep them coming!
Posted by ac hi it's me ac again. i couldn't resist writing another review. this story as gotta be my alltime fav. you had a total of zero spelling errors, a couple of sentences were written in a way that i found slightly confusing, but i am an aussie after all- lol. u developed so much love, trust and understanding in this story, so much beter then the normal, hi i feel horney so lets go fuck!!, stories that made this one so special. please, continue this series cuz u r so talented, and i reckon u can go so far with them.
Posted by anne thank you so much! i'm so glad that people are enjoying this series so far! thanks so much for everything you said!
Posted by Michael Magnificent!!! I did not pay attention to the grammer but rather to the story. I loved the way in the first story that you developed the characters and how they fell in love and then came back with a second story and let them explore the love. The story is believable which is few in these stories. I can't wait to see the continuation of these stories.
Posted by Jackie What can i say? You made another awesome story. I must say your talent for writing erotica blows my mind. You had me goin there for a while. Good Job (again)
Posted by Erin I love this story. It was really nice with the frist one and building up the characters. I really felt as if I knew them. Keep up the good work.
Posted by Ann2 Wonderful story, wish it would happen to me!