Posted by Chuck Weiderholt A very intresting start for a story...hardly can wait to get to read more.
Posted by joey Keslin this story sux
Posted by Bob Your story was truly good. I enjoyed the writing and I know I'll enjoy the next parts.
Posted by mrduhdumdum I thought this story was really good. It was alot better than the normal: "hi, im horny, lets f*ck!" themed stories.
Posted by anne keep that to yourself joey i'd like to see you write a good story. patience is all you need and wait for me to write the rest of the series. if
you don't have patience...it's your loss not mine.
Posted by W Very nice...can't wait to continue it
Posted by jackie awesome...anybody who tells you otherwise can kiss my ass
Posted by liz beautiful story. i can't wait to see how their relationship unfods, beyond the cliche fucking part.
Posted by anne hey! it's me again...just a head's up but i'm almost done with the second story of this series! it usually takes me awhile to write these...so please be patient! yeah...i'm still mad about that comment but joey. so kiss my ass joey!!! you can go suck cock. um...okay just so ya know, i'll be posting the second one up soon. thanks for the positive comments btw!
Posted by ac i just have to say one word about this story- wow. it was great, i was so turned on by those simple actions, that it prooves that this story rocks. can't wait for no.2!!!
Posted by Lennon Hehe, good story, and an interesting author. :-D
Posted by Erin I just read your story, and though I love the "hey wanna fuck?" I really enjoyed this story. Off the read the second part. :)
Posted by ss cant wait for series 2
Posted by Alfreda Smith I must inform my fellow readers that this particular story was sad beyond description. My expectations were quite high I must admit, but the lack of sexual intercourse leaves me disappointed on a whole NOTHER level. I really hate to give bad reviews, but in the interest of saving readers from a staggeringly dissatisfying experience there you go.
Posted by naveen i want friendship with shemales
Posted by SIX i like both kinds the story with a plot and the hi lets fuck so i have a sight for each i enjoyed this thanks SIX
Posted by Kylie great i loved this story i just wish it had kept going for longer than what it did.
Posted by DK I like the story..I'm really curois what happens next..can't wait for the next..