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The Rookie (First Time Story) reviews
Posted by Melissa
Dear Deborah,
That was a great story you wrote yet I was quite sad at the end, God knows that the good die young. I hope you both are completely content when you meet again sweetie.
Posted by Melissa
Dear Deborah,
That was a great story you wrote yet I was quite sad at the end, God knows that the good die young. I hope you both are completely content when you meet again sweetie.
Posted by yod gimel hen
It is a really good story. Althogh I hope it isn't true. i would hate to think of the waste of this promising young life.
Posted by Dan & Victoria
Skillfully written, attention keeping, no inkling suprise ending. It made us feel like we knew you and were a part of your life. We feel certain you have a promising writing future should you desire. On a more personal note... lost our 18 year old son in a car accident and have often wondered what women he left behind feeling like you? Thanks for sharing the memory.
Posted by jerry
WOW I HAVE READ MANY MANY STORIES AND AFTER A WHLE THEY SEEM TO GET BOREING.this one is really good what a sad ending which unfotuneately i can attest to
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