Posted by Rich Howerd It was Good! The spelling was no so good You shood proofread your stories so they are not so bad.But It was good and I have to say I would have loved to be there.Thanks for a grate story.Rich Howerd
Posted by Jean If you are going to write in English, you should really learn to spell the words. Dictonary's are available on line, you should make use of one. The spelling was so bad, that after the forth misspelled word, I had to stop reading what seemed to be a very promising story. Jean
Posted by janet very good if the english was smoother
Posted by qwert Yes sorry the english is bad in this one the next time i will make sure its better thanks for the review
Posted by eric it was good but the gay porn was too much of a turn off as well as a girl farting and pissing
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