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The best friday ever reviews
Posted by G. Lucas
I really like this story, obviously, lol. Could you do me a favor and check out my stories, just tell me when you write another one and I'll check it out for you too.
Posted by A. Johnson
Great story. I really liked all of the detail.
Posted by rock
good story made me wish i was there.
Posted by The One
Nice story, liked it a lot, hope for a sequel. Note though, watch your grammer and spelling, type it first in Word or whatever to make sure it's right.
Posted by Alex
well done! excellant work for your first time, i hope to see some progression from here! bravo bravo! :P
Posted by thanks again Liz
thank you all so much. of course i will read your stories and will greatly aprechate (sorry) reading mein sory about the spelling and grammer mistakes i am the worlds worst speller but i am working on it
Posted by asd;flkjsad; asd;flajsdf;lkj
Learn the proper use of grammar, how to spell, and not to make run-on sentences. You used the word "suppressed" for "surprised." A basic 6th grade education would do a lot for you.
Posted by Katie
Great story. A little annoyed with the description of how things tasted.
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