Posted by LucOuarm Poor grammar and spelling and no idea how to handle dialogue.
Posted by Kelly Pretty hot scenario. I LOVE older women, and this one hits a good spot for me. I hope for more stories with this cast of characters.
Posted by mrduhdumdum it was pretty good, but your grammar was horrible. if you woulda proofread this story woulda been GREAT
Posted by slik it was a bad story needs many things to be erotic