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The Life I Want reviews
Posted by Jackie
You seem to have something nice going on here. I liked this story. It was short, but got the point across. As long as your keeping a storyline, thats all that matters.Welcome aboard.
Posted by ac
yep, definitly a good story. you capture the mood and feelings well, just try not to rush things and let the characters and the relatioship develop.
Posted by Shy
Enjoyed the story very much. Keep up the great work !
Posted by Liz
yeah, go ahead and write more. Obstacles, yes. You can end up like Jackie and write killer novelettes that make people cry cuz the endings are all sad. J/K, Jackie!!! Anyway, yes, you obviously have great stuf here.
Posted by Rachel
This story is amazing unlike some of the stories ive read hear this has real emothion the only thing i would like to add would be for you to let them get to know one another and let there charcters develop
but overall greatstuff! i would definatly like to read some more of your stoies
Posted by Kimberly
i absolutly loved this story please write more. It kinda goes along with what I am going through right now in my own life. I definately want to read more!
Posted by Whitney
Thank you all for your encouragement and constructive criticism, I hope it will all help me in my next story! Thank you again!
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