The Life I Want reviews

yep, definitly a good story. you capture the mood and feelings well, just try not to rush things and let the characters and the relatioship develop.

yeah, go ahead and write more. Obstacles, yes. You can end up like Jackie and write killer novelettes that make people cry cuz the endings are all sad. J/K, Jackie!!! Anyway, yes, you obviously have great stuf here.

Thank you all for your encouragement and constructive criticism, I hope it will all help me in my next story! Thank you again!

Omg this was a great story it had me wet by the end :p

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