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it's a good story but a little confusing in the first couple paragraphs but then again s/m's not my thing, others might like it but not me , but you got talent no doubt.
Posted by SEVERUSMAX
Thanx, . Heh, different strokes for different folks, as they say. I'm curious- are you a lesbian? Also, what was confusing? I don't really know how many of the readers and writers of these stories are lesbians, as opposed to men or bi or straight women. I am a bisexual man, myself, FYI, so it's partly voyeurism for me to write and read such stories, and partly the attempt to indicate that I have some understanding of the difficulties of same-sex interests.
Posted by liz
Ok... here's my thing.
Geez, this was obviously written by a man!
Ok, now that i'm done with that, i will say that that wasn't all that bad for a guy. I'm not into SM myself, except soft stuff once in a while, but this story's sex was pretty good. except most girls (i will not say all) do not like large things shoved up their ass. It just hurts. also, girls do appreciate some semblance of gentleness in sex, even in SM stuff.
Lastly, i've read your other stories, and i know you are no stranger to the concept of PLOT. so please, i know these lesbian things excite you, but put your dick down for just a sec and write some more story, please.
Posted by Sandra
LOL....Liz! Right On Girl!!!
Posted by dropmealine
agree w/ liz
Posted by SEVERUSMAX
Again, specify, girls- this nova terra for me- purely lesbian stories, I mean, as to opposed to the bisexual women stuff that is common in my tales. If you have specific, detailed reasons to concur with Liz, state them.
Posted by ACE
bull crap!
Posted by SEVERUSMAX
Still mindless feedback, mmmm...figures that only a handful of my critics are actually smart.
Posted by john
i would love to see more of this on here
Posted by SEVERUSMAX
Thanks for some back-up, John. So, what did you actually like about it?
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