Posted by fuckmeplease!! write another one please if you do i'll fuck you
Posted by archaic I liked it. Good pace and tempo, the characters were realistic and well described. Be careful about giving young teens the voice of an adult. I doubt the word manhood crops up in too many conversations among 15 year olds. Still, it is certainly a story that is worth fleshing out and running with.
An executive at a Wall Street investment firm has been invited to join one of her co-workers for lunch and gets a big surprise when they stop to visit the co-worker's good friend...