Posted by devi I really enjoyed reading this story since it was my first story to see from this site. Please post more!!!!!!!!!! everyday I visit and im waiting 4 more teen-first-timing storie like that one.
Posted by starre this story is so awesome. this is the kind of story i like to read to get me ready to use my toy... if you know what i mean. this site needs to post more stories like this in this category!
Posted by chiddler Great story, if only i went on that type of summer camp!
Posted by cuteguy one of the best i've ever read. awesome!
Posted by KaNdY sweet!!! got me off twice! good work!
Posted by Demonic Great story, i really enjoyed how you wrote the layout by not going straight into a sex scene but building up the story. Detailed and descriptive writing. This is truly one of the best stories on this site and i have read alot of them.
Keep up the good work
Posted by Death This story, without doubt, is one of the best stories I read on this site. Good job, and keep up the work!
Posted by Alman G Long, but interesting and well structured. The story was detailed and very in-depth. what I mean is, my girlfriend and I wanked all the way through it!Hehe! It was great! Thank you! Thank you so much!
Posted by Xander Great story one of the best on the site. You should definitely make a part 2. The type of writing you do its no centered around anything its just not all about sex not all about detail it really good please please make a part 2 i will be looking foward to it.
Posted by Crystal I didny really like i like THe one with ruby the babysitter and tommy!!
Posted by ffemt loved the sotry would love to see more... keep up the good work
Posted by krogerguy dude this story rocks
Posted by Y I DEFINITLY ENJOYED THIS STORY AND YOU DEFINITLY NEED TO MAKE A PART 2 MAYBE EVEN 3 AS JARED GETS MORE EXPERIENCE IN HIS LITTLE TOWN.
Posted by mark belger this was a great story I wanted to hear him pump her though. iloiloilo10
Posted by Rahat Fantastic! The sex was great, and the storyline was excellent too. You really should write part 2, and devolop both Jared and Valeries characters. Keep up the good work!
Posted by shawn One of the best stories I've seen on this site! Great writing with good background, not all about the sex scenes but a truly good all around story.
Posted by desade really good porn story..very hot
Posted by Cockadoodledo wut about the counselers..? he should fuck them more..
Posted by eukka Great story, you should definately write more.
Posted by katie simply gr8 !!!!!!!!!!