Posted by ??? there were some pretty hot ideas in this story but a lot of grammar and spelling errors that distract from the story, and the sentence structure is pretty bad.
As usual, Erin's vaginal lips bulged obscenely, almost begging
to be either sucked or fucked by some lucky opportunist! "Oh my, god," Virna moaned
softly, "she's even more beautiful than you described her Lin, oh, how I want her so!!!"...