Posted by liz yawn... not my thing.
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Posted by ac i really dislike stuff like this.
Posted by Erin ac~ if you really dislike stuff like this, then why do you read it???
Posted by DD Once again, if you don't approve of the story, don't bother to read it. Maybe some people feel some kind of cruel satisfaction blasting off their unnecessary comments just to have their pig headed opinions heard, but that DOES NOT MAKE IT ACCEPTABLE. To Ac and the other reviewers, take your disgusting opinions elsewhere if you can't say anymore than 5 lines.
Posted by Jackie Okay, this is where i need to jump in. Quit ridiculing each other and getting all emotional. Everybody has their own opinion. It is possible that AC is trying to help Erin rather than just being a bitch. If somebody continues to post stories that are not well edited and have no story line, then people are going to say something. Ergo, AC's point comes in. Erin is not a bad writer, its just that she needs more development and better editing. I think that is the point AC is trying to get across. Sometimes, being a bitch is the only way to get it across. I'm not saying every comment she leaves is alright, i am simply trying to solve the issue that seems to be going on amongst you. Basically, get off her ass. If anything, people should be getting bitchy with me. I leave the most harsh reviews and not to mention is the asshole on this website. Anyways, happy new year.
Posted by Max This was not bad, but not great. I feel the author was robbed by one less star then he/she deserves. Excellent script for a xxx movie with no real plot, but even most of them add some plot today.
Posted by Kim This story was very good, i wud jus love to be in someting like this myself one day!! :)
Posted by Kim This story was very good, i wud jus love to be in someting like this myself one day!! :)
Posted by Marv Harris Erin, you write good stuff.
Posted by Samie wow... is all i have to say!! great job! I love stories like this!! :-) dont listen to those other people, it was wonderful!!