Posted by liz You have issues. i sincerely hope you leave this shit to fantasy only.
Posted by drucilla this story sucked ass..please let this be your last story. I dont think this web site would be able to go on if you wrote another shit story like that.
Posted by StormX02 anyone who comes to this site has issues already =) haha you guys are being hard on him
Posted by mrduhdumdum This was a pretty stupid story, "lets fuck my niece" "oh my im so in love" "lets get you pregnant" thats so generic, and you made it sound like the 16 year old was 10 "im peeing?" wtf?! if shes 16, she knows what "cumming" is! you need to add some creativity to your stories, you could have potential, you TRIED the emotional factor for this story, but you just failed in the execution.
Posted by hate this kind of story Hey redneck hillbilly leave this shit on the cutting room floor god anyone who reads this stuff is a sick mother fucker who should marry his/her cousin.
Posted by WTF, this guy is gross I, Aggree this is some fucked up shit, this dude writes some fucked up nasty shit, PLEASE DO ME A FAVOR AND DONT WRITE ANYMORE INCEST SHIT THAT IS JUST FUCKING SICK
Posted by virgin boysss ehm ya, thas storry is vary........werd. are yoo the garl in the storry?? wow yoo hav benn fukked buy severrall menn, thats coll. haha you are suchh slutt. seee yaaaa in anoter fikk, buyyyyyy
Posted by incest boy oh my god!!!!! this story sucks, please donīt write anymore, because if you do iīm gonna puke all over the computer bur i will imagen that itīs you face. haha, anyhow youīve probably been through the same thing, neeeeeerd, the only person that fucks you is probably your father and you will be screaming" yesss yesss, daaaad ha-haaaaarder daaaaaaaaaad yeaaaaahhhhh, iīm cummminnggggg daaaaaaad aaaahhhhhh" haha neeeed. you fucking slut, donīt write anymore ok?? good, thaaaank you!!!!! ;P
Posted by Sickboy this is better than some of your other shit but you still need help and get it soon YOU FREAK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by Go To Hell I agree this story is bad, but yall are being so hard on him for the incest part and I was just wondering if you had read anything else on the website b/c 25% of the stories are about incest.
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