Posted by Liz *smacks head in hands over and over*
Posted by SEVERUSMAX Is that a good or a bad review?
Posted by liz oy... let's just say you will never be a woman.
not that you might consider that a bad thing...
but at least you are improving.
Posted by SEVERUSMAX Specifics, please! Your last review had some specifics, so I would like to know what exactly you liked and disliked, bearing in mind the differences in taste. You said, "you will never be a woman", which is obvious enough, but what exactly did you mean? Naturally, I'm not inclined to view things through the same prism, as it were, but your opinions are valuable feedback.
Posted by smakesmax over head 4 stupid story! hers some feedback why the fuck do you keep writing this shit its absolute crap!
Posted by SEVERUSMAX Go fuck yourself, "smackshead"- I'm looking for intelligent feedback! Specifics, detailed reasons, with some kind of logic, which is what Liz at least had to offer in one of her reviews.
Posted by SEVERUSMAX Learn to spell, too, before you write critical reviews.
Posted by Sex Kitten This story was ok, some of the wording though wasn't really a turn on
Posted by SEVERUSMAX What about them didn't turn you on?
So he laid me down on the bed and put my legs over his shoulders. He dove his tongue deep inside of my pussy and then licked my clit vigorously. He kissed all over my pussy and sucked on my lips...