Posted by Felicia If you do not like plotline, realistic characters, and emotions that go beyond feral lust, please do not rate my stories, because they are not for you.
Posted by Rob One of the very best stories I have ever read. It allows your imagination to run away, right into the story. Absolutely erotic in every respect. Great job by the author. Would like to see more of the same quality. Story is setup properly then draws you in. Wonderfully imaginative.
Posted by Felicia Thank you, Rob. BTW all, I was a bit upset when my rating earlier was only at 5.75, but I didn't mean for the above post to sound snide.
Posted by JT Felicia-
Keep your opinions to yourself. People will rate you if they want too, and they will rate them how they want too, if your uncomfortable with that then maybe you shouldn't post your stories. Quit trying to tell everyone else how to write. We don't need a critic around here. Haven't you ever been tought that if you don't have anything nice to say don't say it at all??? I think you would be wise to just shut-up and write like everyone else. In fact, maybe instead of criticizing everyone elses work, you should come up with some creative story lines. People come to these sites to read fantasies, not what could happen to them the next day!
Posted by Felicia Alright, JT. I've made my peace with you and altered my etiquette. Let that be the end.
Posted by pooh I loved this story and give it a 10! Forget all your haters that will try to put you down, do what you do best.
Posted by Taylor This was an extremely good story i was cumming for a good 3 minute.I say this authour should make a sequel.
Posted by Guru Indeed one of the best stories I have read. My imagination was running wild with scenes from stepmom and stepdaughter in bed. Boy would I have loved to be a fly on the wall for those two weeks. Great job.
Posted by Peter Horhay Thak you for showing that erotic doesn't have to be trashy this was a great story and sad at that but very arousing. Keep up the good work
Posted by Anonymous Definantly one of the best stories on this site. I give it a perfect 10. GREAT JOB!
Posted by Dalia I loved this story! It was great... I couldn't help myself to a good fingering.. I give it an 11!
Posted by jessi Awsome story! I loved it. The way u described pure love and lust mix in to was bliss...tho i was alittle shocked at the ending...but all in all it was execellent story
Posted by harvinder Awesome!!!
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