Some first times should happen all the fucking time reviews
Posted by poop this story is way too wordy and it just wasnt good
Posted by poop this story is way too wordy and it just wasnt good
Posted by Randi Younge Well, one reader thought the story was so bad he had to review review it it twice. Who's wordy now? Actually this story was not written to inspire those that are ultra kinky, etc. And I don't know if poop likes stories on incest, but I am told that is the most popular category that readers hit on, so to speak. This writer gets kinky - read Orgy of Orgies, for example, etc. - but can't get in the zone for incest or beastiality stories. Can't do it, and I would not like to kiss those that do do it. Whatever gets you through the night, it's alright, yes Mr. Lennon, I agree. The first-time story is admitedly tame, intended for younger, less-experienced that haven't given or received a tit fuck, because it is an experience not to be missed. And fine nipples SHOULD be worshipped. Anyhow, poop's poop on my piece is helpful, and I welcome any and all comments readers might take the time to add in the review area after reading any of my work; you can find them all by clicking "authors." Thanks to all, and best regards to all. - the author, Randi Younge, 11/26/01
Posted by vinod fucking one
wastage of time to read this story
Posted by Heywood Jablomee I gave up half way through. Try sticking to one topic and stop wandering off with all the tangents. Even your reply to someone else's review was way too wordy. Cut to the chase and just write your story. Should you be descriptive? Yes... but this was WAY too much. Better luck next time.
Posted by blondy this story sucks! what a waste of my time.
Posted by yeah sure hahaha
that's the most articulate and educated sex story I have ever read.
Posted by yeah sure pay no attention to these philistines, and keep writing
sex stories that stimulate the largest erogenous zone of all. the hoi palloi can fuck in the streets.
Posted by Miclena Yoor storys mek Me verry randy, I have to play with myself wen i reed, please can you send me somepics and other strorys, please.
Posted by Jess I too gave up after reading the first few paragraphs. You really should just get to the point, and not go on a long tangent on how nice this womens breasts looked.
Posted by I hate u abouslety terrible
too much talk, not enough descriptions
Posted by sriraaam hai
Posted by Lee Stupid
Posted by ROBERT BURGESS LOUSY STORY DID NOT LIKE IT AT ALL
Posted by Risika Don't listen to them. Your story was absolutely divine and I look forward to reading more of your work. There needs to be more people who can seduce with words alone.
Posted by Hilarious Great story. didn't get me off, but was entertaining.
Posted by jack Hey i am Arman (22), I got bored and feeling lonely after all. I am looking for casual fun, age, size, looks unimportant, If you are really interested in these kind of relationship mail me
Posted by Bob Wtf
It’s cold and large touching my lips..and … inserting.. I squirm… it dips in deeper.. the pleasure is almost immediate… “hahha. Wow she loves it… she loves to eat that banana… man.. where did you find a banana that huge…”… my cunt takes the banana with anticipation …the whole fruit is inside me.. more whip cream on the fruit.. on my clit .