Posted by rave Learn to spell, Please.
Posted by John I can't read the story! It is virtually unintelligible!!!!!!!!
Posted by john good story... but you need to watch for your spelling
Posted by Martin Sklar If you are going to write another story, you should give serious consideration to taking a seventh grade English course to learn the basics of the English language, how to speak and write in it. Consistancy of thought would be a plus to, so good luck in any future endeavor on your part. The Editor