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Sally reviews
Posted by Carlos
This fiction is nice, and boy...this story has taught me how should I turn my girlfriend on...and make my female friends hot. Thanks A...dar...
Posted by you suck
ok, theres a bunch of things wrong with this one. the descriptions are nice but the way they talk and the way the story goes in kind of pointless. i mean, the guys like, "oh, im gonna share you with my friends, but if you dont let me, i wont fuck you." wtf is that??? i mean seriously, the reality of the dialogue in this is non-existant. stop writing man, you suck.
Posted by Moses
That was fucking retarded.
Posted by LucOuarm
The dialogue was poorly spaced and oddly punctuated, but this was otherwise a nice first effort.
Posted by bridgett
hey loved your story add part 2 soon
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