Posted by Jackie A good storyline with horrible writing.
Posted by Liz One word: edit. the storyline was good, and the ending was profound and tear-jerking. or maybe i'm just hypersensitive to that sorta thing. but seriously, go with another story, then make sure you edit it. K?
Posted by ac uh i think you may be hypersensitive to that thing, lol. as the've said, nice try, but you don't have any grammatical highlights in your work mate.
Posted by tina I got off.....my pussy is dripping now.......mmmmm
Her enjoyment aroused me as well. Her hips rolled on my fingers and face as the nectar from her orgasm descends from her pussy and down my chin and fingers. I stuck my fingers into my mouth to suck off her sweet sensation.
Note: I have reposted all of my Sharing Black stories so that they all can be on one authors profile. Some of the names have been changed but the story is still the same...