Posted by Jackie Very indulging.
Posted by ashner hi new writer!
you rock! you rave! you are amazing! i really don't know what to say! i love you,girl!
Posted by Felicia Second person viewpoint always strikes me as odd, but an otherwise well-written short piece. I like your theme.
Posted by Felicia The second person viewpoint strikes me as odd, but an otherwise nice piece. I like your theme
Posted by Liz Oh my god. Ok, there's not much i can say that i haven't already said. but please just do us a favor and keep writing and writing. this even is excellent, no, beyond excellent. Awesome piece.
Posted by erin very nice, i like the way you wrote this one. alot different from the others, but not in a bad way.
Posted by ac very, very well done. enjoyed it thoroughly.
Posted by meen I think companionship and fidelity are two very strong themes in your works. I LIKE that. Lesbians aren't just sex-starved animals, they're humans with emotions. Porcelain. So appropriate a title for this piece. My favourite piece so far.
Posted by DD Well, I am very pleased that at least some writers are not obsessed with porn. I love emotional stories, especially those of the same sex type stories. You've really got a knack for writing romance. Keep it up, please, this section needs you for stories that don't suck!
Posted by Luinmir This piece is truly beautiful
Posted by Aimus that was a truely beatiful bit of writing. your compassion shows through your words, please don't ever stop.