Pay up time reviews

Apparently the writer did not bother editing her work at all -- the result a poor story.

The story had a good plot etc...as far as I know. I couldn't get through the whole story because there weren't any qoutation marks etc. I had to read lines over and over again to realise who was speaking. You need some lessons in story writing and editing.

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