Posted by Carlisle The situation is unbelievable, and unrealistic; but the overall concept was nice. The vocabulary was large and in-depth but this makes the story slow and boring. Keep the idea but "dumb" it down next time.
Posted by SEVERUSMAX What's so unlikely about it- don't you think that some career women might have secret longings for submission and alpha males to share? They might just want to let their hair, right? After all, what better to relieve the stresses of work, that hot, sweaty sex?
Marsden's head was by now rolling around on her shoulders as his
pecker began to lurch out of control, and as his climax began to fire off, Vern surprised him by kissing him
hard on the mouth while the two sex hungry studs
ground their hot cocks together in an orgasmic rainbow of colors!!!...