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No Boys Allowed reviews
Posted by jackie
too cheesy
Posted by liz
yeah. i agree. that is so childish, too. come on, yo!
the stuff in the gay guy section is more fun than that stuff!
Posted by Gilmuriel Dragonbane
meh. it was my first story of this nature, i didn't even set out to do it like this, it just came out like this. besides, i wouldn't figure that girls would like it, it's more for the guys.
Posted by LucOuarm
Paragraphs far too long and dialogue handled poorly. Others (above) have commented on the content.
Posted by Ardin Resolute
C'mon guys, lighten up. This isn't supposed to be award winning literature. I thought the story was short, fun and erotic.
No, it's not the greatest thing ever written, but I didn't come here to read pulitzer material.
Ignore them, it was good for a first story.
Posted by Gilmuriel Dragonbane
it wasn't supposed to be about the dialogue.....
Posted by MeSelf
Nice job!
Posted by Tennion
I though it ras pretty good. Nice scenes, but it started to die down a bit toward the end
Posted by blimblamblom
i thought it was fine mate
Posted by Gilmuriel Dragonbane
glad to hear some positives :) and i'm sorry about the dying at the end, i started to run dry of ideas lol. i'm thinking of doing a sequel...any thoughts?
Posted by Lynn
I liked it!!
Posted by Jackie
Okay...
Nobody asked for the author to be Ernest fucking Hemingway, but i am not going to lie. What do you want me to say? "oh my god, that was the best story ever." No. Shut the fuck up. If you cant handle your reviews, dont fucking post.
Posted by Gilmuriel Dragonbane
ooooook....that was unnecessary, i never claimed to be Hemingway, and it's not as if i am crying because a few people didnt like it, they can kiss my ass if they don't. so there.
Posted by I Luv Pussy
Fuck off people, I thought it was great. Didn't think this had to be award winning material anyway. It's meant to get people horny, which I am, so I have an appointment with my vibe right now.
Posted by hate this story
yeah and your name says it all !
Posted by Danny
I liked it, it's just right
Posted by Up the Irish
well i think it and hope it could happen, Did get a bit bad at the end but there only young inexperienced girls.:-) one for the lads
Posted by Up the Irish
well i think it and hope it could happen, Did get a bit bad at the end but there only young inexperienced girls.:-) one for the lads
Posted by Erin
I thought it was pretty good. It got me good and wet. I wouldnt mind having my birthday party like that.
Posted by xlive2
i think the stories great
1 of the best on the lesbian side of things
Posted by Gilmuriel Dragonbane
thanks xlive and Erin :) im working on a sequel, but it might be a month or two, i gotta make sure it's good....
Posted by holly
i loved this story! it made me really wet and also made me want a party just like it! hope it can come true. plus my names in the story too:)
Posted by fan of the work
i came hard... thats what matters
Posted by Steam Heat
I thought it was very erotic and stimulating. Which IMO is the point of a site called "Sex Stories", not "Angsty Lesbian Romance with Literary Pretentions". I'm sorry to see that you seem to have been chased off by reviews enforcing an IMO inappropriate standard. Personally, I'd love it if you wrote more stories.
Posted by clit sucker
It was great, just kinda stopped suddenly.
Posted by (none)
I really liked it and i'm looking forward to the sequel.
Posted by ...
This was great, but it would hae been better had it been an illustrated story.
Posted by candace
cool
Posted by Ashley
i thought it was hptt as fuck. i havent fucked a girl in almost 4 years so this story got me so damn wet
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