Posted by Jeeves Not good. It's too dry and unimaginative.
Posted by Julie The theory of this story is wonderful, but the descriptions are lacking and the author does not really portray any of the passion or excitement which should be expressed with this tale.
Posted by dalm Good work but...
Quote "... but I wasn't interested in just him. Chris and I had been hot for each other for some time, but his Girlfriend got in the way. Anyway that is another long story." What about THAT story???