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My New Home...1 reviews
Posted by cHUCK wEIDERHOLT
`I was totaly ensorbed into the story...just getting good...'N IT WAS LIKE HEARING SOMEONE TRYING TO OPEN THE DOOR...i WAS EXCITED 'n NO WAY TO FINSH OFF...WHERES REST OF THIS hot STORY AT...
Posted by someone
Good story...quite a turn on...but where's the rest of it?
Posted by anne
rest of it? i'm working on it...don't rush me! these things take time...and i take a lotta time! um...just be patient!
Posted by Tallulah
Honey, I'm sorry, but writing is not for you. Your grammar is terrible and you have no sense of timing. You admitted in the beginning that nothing like this has happened to you, so don't write about it. Don't write about tragedy that you have not lived through, it will always come out sounding trite and pretentious. You write as though English was a second language for you. I suggest you just stick to READING stories. Forget writing them. I'm sorry to be so harsh.
Posted by RALL
SO FAR GOOD, WOULD LOVE TO HEAR MORE IMPORTANT STUFF,
LIKE HOW U FINGERED HER AND SHE TO U ETC. I WANT TO HEAR MORE ABOUT YOUR ORGANISMS ETC.
Posted by ray
beautiful story. would love to read more of love making and kissing etc. wish i was there to watch
please write to me rallzn1@yahoo.com
Posted by Angela Landsberry
Anne:
Great story so far, looking forward to reading the rest..
and Tallulah:
Piss off! Go critic a Readers Digest article. You would know a good story if it bit you on your trite and pretentious ass. Fuck off
Posted by anne
Hm...that's an interesting comment tallulah. Oddly enough my ratings are high for such poor stories. Besides, I was what? 15 or 16 when I wrote these things. If I wanted to write a novel I'd write one. This isn't a novel. Unfortunately your grammar isn't quite up to par if you think my grammar isn't above average. Anyway, thanks angela for the positivity and all my other readers who enjoy my work. Certainly I hope my grammar aint not bad nuff 4 every body for understand. =)
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