Posted by nunyabiz Learn to spell and use some grammar, retard.
Posted by dharmesh hi i am dharmesh hi sex
Posted by N/A LISTEN NUNYABIZ YOU FUCKING LITTLE KNOB. MY SPELLING IS AND IS BRILLIANT IN THE STORY,IT IS MY FIRST TIME I HAVE WROTE A STORY ON HERE. YOU SEEM TO BE VERY JEALOUS AND ALSO YOU ARE PROBABLY A WERID PERSON WHO GOES ON WEBSITES POSTING BAD COMMENTS ETC. A STORY IS NOT REALLY BASED ON THE SPELLING'S AND GRAMMAR BUT MORE IMPORTANTLY BASED ON THE WORDING OF THE STORY AND HOW YOU WRITE IT AS WELL. ALSO IF YOU CALL ME A SO CALLED RETARD AGAIN THEN I WILL FIND YOUR IP AND BREAK YOUR LEGS YOU GOT THAT AND THAT IS NOT A THREAT THAT IS A PROMISE YOU LITTLE KNOB.
Posted by tera baap yeh sare chutia hai bosrike
Posted by luvn diz* uhhh are you writting a short story or your experience..
SERIOUSLY you sound lyk some imaginative freak
that doesnt get action
Posted by liketofuck dont pay these idiots any mind. there is always some nut job posting negs about everyone elses storys. they dont get it. this is a sex site and its the story not the fucking grammer that counts. if these fucking idiots want great grammer I suggest they sit and read an english book. ( how thrilling is that ? probably the biggest thrill they get LOL) and leave the story telling to the story tellers. its the same thing for me. I have 30 pwoplw love what I write and one idiot like this.
Posted by jordana Wow... written like a true virgin... next time you write it might help if you have some experience...
Posted by Crak Wow. Let me guess, you failed out of high school and never even attempted to get a GED. I tried to read this but the complete lack of grammer made it impossible.
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Posted by Megan Simms I really dont want to be mean so PLEASE dont take this offensively but you should use quotation marks because I couldn't figure out who was talking and what the thoughts were. Of course I don't write any better so I can't really judge...
Posted by NSAOK Liketofuck - It's storIES not storys. And N/A! "THE SPELLING'S AND GRAMMAR" well done, you've just proved yourself to be the buffoon you most probably are in one neat and concise phrase. And how do you plan to find anyone's IP address you child? Your writing's so bad it's like a parody of bad English. Megan Simms, I think this fool should take offence because it's due to people like him and LIKETOFUCK (if he ever gets so lucky, a bucket load of Rohypnol and a spade required for that ever to happen I think...)that such appalling use of the english language is entering modern British vernacular. If the government ever allow vigilante culling of the dimwits of this nation (we live in hope) you guys have catapulted yourselves to the top of the list. Thank you and good night.
This is a story about a young girl whose heart was broken. On her summer vacation, she meets a young woman who will change her way of looking at men and the world around her. If you are offended by slang and use of narcatics, then I suggest you don't read this story. I was trying to recreate reality...