Me and the girls from work reviews

The absolute first thing you need to do is read what you wrote, edit your changes, go back reread a paragraph at a time and do re-editng. You have too may sentence fragments, they are fine to make a point but should be used with caution. I liked the story concept and think you did a really good job for your first story.

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