Posted by Allenby Good one, do a follow up.
Posted by L I really like this one. I'm a bit of a romantic. This one really got to me, make them longer next time.. great job.
Posted by Alex yeah that was good id enjoy a follow up, nice job!
Posted by jeanie the story was fantastic.you absolutely should do another one.You have got some real talent.
Posted by Andrew This is a very good story, You should do a follow up of it.
Posted by ck Write a Part 2 please...it's a good story line...
Posted by Lauren M. I guess I'm going to do a part 2. Thanks for all the posts. I apreciate all of you taking your time to write a review. I'm going to Vagas for a few weeks so it might take a while to get part 2 in, but I'll have it for ya'll asap! Thanks again!
Posted by jessica awwww that was so sweet! i wish my first time would have been like that. but stereotypes mattered too much..oh well one can still dream:)cant wait for part 2
Posted by jaxs I loved your story! it is great i would love a part 2
Posted by Jeffrey O I thought it was just ok. No need for a part 2 unless you add her sister or the football team to the mix.
Posted by CKY96 LISTEN TO CKY
That was a good story. Do a follow up, may make it even better.
Posted by ya-ya this is a great story.do a follow up
Posted by Allenby To Jeffrey O: If she adds up the footbal team she should add your mother too - to give them all blow jobs...
Posted by hunterslane chick gotta question. R U Lauren Morrow by any chance? really loved the story. Definately do a part 2.
Posted by jolly awsome story!! too good!!keep the goodwork up.... i am looking fforward for part 2!!
best of luck for that!1
Posted by Lauren M. To: hunterslane chick sry, i'm not Lauren Morrow. Just a coincidence. I'm working on part 2 now... I'll get it to ya'll as soon as i return from Vagas. Thx.
Posted by sarah. s. that was great!!!
you should also do a part 3... :)
Posted by Roxann GREAT STORY!.....Keep following it UP...I want MORE
Posted by jeanie r u almost done with the story? i'm so wishing that u were already done. hurry PLEASE!!!!but take your time:)
Posted by Steve that was awsome. my girl friend and i got really horney with that thought that it was really good go for part 2.
Posted by Not so Innocent You need to do part 2....Please!!!
Posted by Lauren M. i'm so sorry u guys...i've been soooo busy lately that i haven't been able to write anything. Thankfully, my schedule has finally cleared and i'm almost done with part 2. Thank you for all your patience. I hope you enjoy my work.
Posted by MZ nice`
Posted by josh that was nice. you should do a part 2. the two of them exploring their sexuality for the first time/
Posted by Sara I really do think you should do a part 2. This story was amazing!!!
Posted by thunda please do a part 2 to this story i really enjoyed it
Posted by Amy i think u'r story was fantastic......waiting for more.
Posted by The iMacGuy That has got to be the sweetest, most romantic story i ever read. Great work. would really appreciate a part 2 -The iMacGuy
Posted by Daniel Great story, your a good writer. Make a part 2 i love the storyline.
Posted by natasha yes. oh my gawd yes. make a second one!!!!!
Posted by Penguin Yes, do a sequel.
Posted by Lauren M. OH MY GOD! I TOTALLY FORGOT ABOUT THIS!!! I'M SOOOOO SORRY YOU GUYS! I PROMISE I'LL FIND THE TIME TO DO A SEQUEL... SOON, I PROMISE!!! SORRY AGAIN!!! THANKS FOR ALL THE REVIEWS! I FEEL LOVED! LOL. ANY SUGGESTIONS? E-MAIL ME AT BluEyedBlond88@aol.com . THX AGIN! HUGS,
LAUREN (author)
Posted by meghan this story was so hott and sexy PLEASE make a part 2!!!!!
Posted by chris awsome story make a make 2
Posted by David you should do part 2. part 1 was good
Posted by Laura i loveee itttt. do another
Posted by sims xxx
Posted by George i came. twice. part two would be appreciated.
Posted by SFMR You should DEFINITELY do a part 2 with this one. It's sensual, and very hott!
Posted by samantha OmG u should do a part two it was so cute i swear i wish my first time is like that but hey iam only 14 i can only dream.!.=[
Posted by kim yes i think you should make a part 2.
Posted by La`Nae Yes
DO A PART TOO!!!
I loved that story!
Posted by Lauren M. ok, so i wrote a pt 2 but i cant remember my login or pw and the e-mail i provided to them is no longer in use... i've contacted them but they say they cant do anything about it and wont let me publish it... i am going to publish it at another site but i dont know of any... any suggestions? thx!
Posted by Tom definetly edo a part 2!
Posted by k yes def!
Posted by ANONOMOUS YES You Should do Part2 that was great!!!
Posted by alyssa yah that was a great story so i think that you should do a part 2
Posted by Rachael yes u should do a part 2. Please do a part 2 please
Posted by Leah omg...my boyfriend and I love it. you should definitely do a part 2!!!
Posted by lena hell yeah do part 2 i wanna know wat happens w/yall