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Living Again pt. 1 reviews
Posted by ac
ok well it wasn't bad, just not my thing, but i can't diss a story for just that. you could be a pretty good author if you worked on characterization and emotional development. i dunno, as i said, it's not my thing, i'm not into the whole, hi, how are you, i'm horney let's go fuck our brains out in a public bathroom. And let's be realistic, who goes out in public without underwear? that kinda thing is to male for me, the whole 'Can't... control my... testosterone...' thing get's boring.
but the point is, regardless of what i like, it was well written (grammacticly) and had good ideas (especially the beginning) and presented good writting skills. i just found it a bit stereotyped in a way, i was chatting to a guy on the internet the other day, and he asked me when i knew i was a lesbian and i said all my like but it took the first 13 and two tattoos to accept it, and he said 'Really? You just, knew? Like, it wasn't because of a bad experience or something? You mean you can actually be born... gay?
ugh. i think the problem is, guys find it so hard to believe that someone could actually not be attracted to them, so we go to the second resort, our own kind. once again, ugh.
i think it's like, once you've read one of these stories, you've read them all, i don't know if you care, you probably don't, but the reason why i'm not ripping into you is because you do have writting potential, but honestly, your story was the same as all the rest of the other masturbation stories and boring. as i said, you probably don't care, but keep trying.
Posted by Jackie
male + extremley raw lesbian porn + no feeling in characters + assumptions in how women really feel = half the stories in this section.
Ugh.
Just because this male actually knows a little vocabulary doesn't rectify the fact that his story is bland, just like every other guy who tries to write lesbian porn.
Posted by ac
hey look jackie,didn't say i enjoyed the story, i didn't really, but i just said the author had writing skills and could write something good, if they tried. i don't bash people ALL the time you know, i do really enjoy writing a proper REVIEW once in a while, and actually review my thoughts and opinions of the story. as i said, i can't diss a story that i plain and simply don't like, there has to be a reason and a way to fix it.
Posted by ac
and also, i honestly think the author is a chick and to the author- thanks for the e-mail, just read it then, i'll check out your site and let you know what i reckon, i totally support authors who play around with their style, and as i said, just cause some don't like it, does not mean it isn't a good story.
Posted by Liz
oh god.
yeah, well written. My thing? definitely not. I'll take the questionable author's name (it really is androgenous) and will ignore whether the author's male or female. all i know is that the story is well written, the emotions are there- just not the ones we typically enjoy finding in these stories, and some things in the plotline are not for this queer audience here. well... i think it's too early this AM and i should shut up now.
Peace
Posted by bloody
I argee with Jackie! Sorry! Guys don't even understand women. Dont write here anymore! Lesbian stories suppose to be for women. :oP
Posted by ac
people, we do not own this section. anybody and everybody has the right to post here. clearly, due to this story's rating, a fair few people do like this story, and just because we don't don't, dosn't mean the author has any less of a right to post here. if you made a childrens film and no adults liked but it still got awesome ratings, does it make it any less of a film? does it automaticly mean the director is shit and s/he has no right to make anymore films? i really hate to say this, but the author has the right to post here. there are people (lesbians included) who like this sort of thing, and we can't take the right of having this kind of story on here. if you don't want ot read this sort of stuff, then simply don't read it. sorry guys, but we can't ask for our own rights and deny others theirs.
sorry if i sound like a bitch, it truely wasn't my intention.
love ac.
Posted by .
Hmmm.. never have i ever said to this author to never post anything again. I simply said many of the stories posted on this website suck. Period.
Only certain people i tell to keep shit out of this section.
Honestly, most of the writers who put effort into their work post in this section. I hate to see other people who dont try at all ruin it.
Even if i say mean things, I have no power over people submitting garbage. I just hope that my review makes them try harder next time. I have no right to exempt anybody from posting thier stories. My goal is mainly for people to truly try when writing a story. Most of the time this doesnt work, but i figure its better than doing nothing.
This author did try, and i give them credit. It takes guts to post something and allow other people to criticize it. I apologize if my review was harsh. I just have wierd opinions on things and storyline itself kind of gave me the creeps. From now on i will keep my opinion to myself.
Good Job, Keep posting.
Jackie
Posted by ac
hey jac, did i direct that comment at you? and i agree with you, occasionly, someone posts somethings that just truely sick, but even so, it's in their right. and i only truely, flat out diss someone when it dosn't show writing skills, in my eyes, and is just crap. but i don't, and as far as i know, havn't told people to not write. and as i said jackie, my comment wasn't direclty related to you. honestly, i wan't refering to you. i just was a little peeved that after simply saying a story was well written, people dissagreed with me and flat out ignored the fact that i was applauding a well written story, not saying i got off on it. don't keep your comments to yourself, that's what this section (the review section) is for. well i gotta go, very (very!) big night for me tonight, i'm proposing to my girlfriend. and i only got 6 hours to get ready, be as scared as hell, stress my brains out and wonder about all the possible outcomes. all two of them. well, better get to it.
love ac.
Posted by Casey
Hi everyone and thank you...I think. :-)
Actually, I am all female and I did put quite a bit of thought into this story.
I've had many folks tell me they like the story, some say it gets off to a slow start, and others don't like it at all.
So be it.
I'll write again and I hope you'll enjoy the next one.
I don't know who you received an email from, but it wasn't me. Sorry. Someone is obviously playing games with you.
Also, there are many people who don't like wearing undies...in or out of public. Myself being one of them. To each their own?
Thanks again.
Posted by none
you people might as well start your own chat room here since y'all have nothing better to do
Posted by Debbie
Casey, This is one hot story! I had something similar happen to me 15 yrs. ago A couple picked me up in a bar pretty much the same way. Hope you write again- I will definatley read your writings! Debbie
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