Posted by emu i love it! The description is wonderful, the plot is strong,and the characters are interesting. The ending definitely leaves you wanting more. Keep writing.
Posted by Jack Thanks
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Tears began forming in his eyes, and seconds later he was crying like a two year old!!! "What are you crying about," she snapped!?!" "I-I love you, Mistress," he sobbed, "h-how could you think those bad things about me, look at my penis, isn't it always hard for you, I-I could never keep it up for someone I didn't care for!!!"...