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First exam reviews
Posted by anon
The story needs more than just an overly excited patient. It's lacking in substance. A very boring read. It has a good premise, you just need to make a story out of it. Also, why does EVERY sentence end with three exclamation marks or two exclamation marks and one question mark? Use exclamation marks sparingly. It will make your writing much more enjoyable to read. Also, be careful about using the wrong "to" (instead of "too") and "buy" (instead of by"), etc. Those are very amateurish mistakes.
Posted by gigolo
very nice.i hope i could be there to
Posted by mike
not so bad could of had dilldo action but oh well
Posted by mike
not so bad could of had dilldo action but oh well
Posted by manmadhan
yeah that's a nice story to read please send me stories in tamil i like this very much
Posted by yiyu
erwa
Posted by Sensual Guy
Great Storie
Posted by Roy
WOW Hot story Stephanie.
Posted by TONY
GREAT STORY,FANTASTIC
Posted by Baylock
the story has good promise but is too short and lack character development. Nicole and the nurse sound arificial and we don't learn very much about them. Also the sex scene starts and is over before there is much description of the action or what each character is thinking.
Posted by Ed Terry
Exciting story,I loved it.Nicole will have more than enough milk for hubby & baby,they more they suck the more she makes.Plus if like my wife she'll have orgasms from hubby sucking her dry.Then like me he'll have some cream to suck after the milk.She need extra protein while lactating so she'll have to suck hubby's cock allot to get all she needs.It will be the best time of both their lives as it was both my wife's & mine.Add more to story.
Posted by eck
very very nice ;)
Posted by lesbian lover
i had to get my girl to suck me during that omg i just had the best orgasm oh oh oh thats great i just love the way my girl fucks me
Posted by daniella
am just dripping right now....gosh thats just so horny
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