Posted by Remi interested in what happens next
Posted by Koko This story really sucked. It lacked description, details, even a semi-decent story-line. It seems like you just threw a couple taboo sex cliches into a story you wrote in 10 minutes. This needs a LOT of work.
Posted by Peter Horhay can't agree with koko more, take some time and really write it.
Posted by hotchick6969 more exciting stories to cpme
Posted by joojoo I love this