Posted by LucOuarm Bizarre, but to my taste. Needed better editing.
Posted by janeen absolutely disgusting
Posted by asdf yeah that was pretty gross..
Posted by ages what are you???? loco???
Posted by jro what the fuck are you araist or something
Posted by boomboy Not only did it turn me OFF it was disgusting. are you some kinda weird "The South will rise again" person?
Posted by Jackie Part of me says you could be a halfway decent writer if you werent so disgusting, but this story kind of blew that idea out of the water. You are fucked up dude.
Posted by Liz yes. you take gross and bizarre and go WAY too far with it. i only hope to god your writing is based on fantasy alone. you need serious help.
Posted by lala ok this was just fucking crazy and weird...in short it was DISGUSTING!!!! and in a very disturbing way!! i bet ur probs a wierd wacko!!!! shessh
Posted by lolp this is abusive ans sick
Posted by po what the hell was this? I thought this had the making of a good story til sentene two. get help never use the word nigger agin you sick bastard
This about a single mom with kids who decides she wants to find a good man. She always gets the ones who are demanding and controlling. She falls in love with a controlling man once again. Cause the other man was boring in bed and decided that her sex life needed more...