This story, is well, really sick. I mean, at first it was good, but then it turned to horror!!! The author should probaly print it and put it in a book of erotic horror stories!! But it was hard to read, cuz it was so, discusting and just harsh. SICK.
Posted by Tramp-o-line Indeed, J E MARTIN, you are one sick fuck.
Posted by sexxy OMG! it started off good, but went waaay down hill. you have no respect at all for religion, i mean reall! pissing on the bible? your twisted! you are one sick puppy guy!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Posted by dolph this is fucking insest not fetish you dumb fuck
Posted by Sexy_fuck_dildo Sick SICK story. you should be ashamed
Posted by alexa this is sick. it should be removed from here.
Posted by sal-sal the story was okay at first, but the last part made me sick!!! that was so unexpected and no art in that......you should probably seek some professional help.
Posted by mrduhdumdum This story was ok at first, but then it just turned into a really stupid "murder" story. People that can get off on reading about pissing on the bible and slicing women's tits off should be condemmed, thats just sick.
Posted by SeXyLaCrOsSeBoY who ever wrote this story is deffinately not a christian, most likely from a different religion you stupid fuck! you are a very shallow person to write something like this.
Posted by ddiicckk you pervert!!!!!! pissing on the bible, you should go to a metal hospital or something.
Posted by the review man that is like so fucking screwed up. get some help you screwed up bastard. The bible! pissing on the bible! you're going to hell for sure you fucking jackass
Posted by asdf HAHAHAHHA LMAO this is hilarious!! J E Martin you're fucking sick. lol.
Posted by lmp Wow! What were you like as a child? Did you kill animals and play with matches? You really need to see someone about this-you should be on medication! I thought the whole story was poorly written and not very good.
Posted by fuck god and all connected to him how loung till u get a women and make your sick idea come true? or have u done to one or more all ready? or who knows are u the dad?
Posted by Tejia What of sick fucking person writes this shit the hell with this shit damn it just fucking damn it!!!!
Posted by No Why Man Why write pissed on a bible you sir have no spect for religon this story should be removed and delted forever