Posted by Doug Please, Please, Please learn how to use something other than an exclamation mark for punctuation!!! They are to be used to show surprise or excitement, not merely to end a sentence. It's almost as if you are hollering your entire story. The content is good, and I enjoy your stories, but please learn how to punctuate.
Posted by Simon AKAKAKAKA
Posted by Mark Boring
Posted by Millsy excellent
Posted by oli i liked it
Posted by bite me faggot you are full of fucking utter shit.. i dont belive that for one second. Go fuck your little teacher AGAIN.. its illegal ya know?? well bye bye you wished-you-fucked-the-meanest-teacher guy
peeeaaaccceeee oooouuutt
p....s....dont fuck too many teachers now ;)
Posted by none of youre buisness It's ok, but just ok. ok ?
Posted by fsdfsf i liked it
Posted by Trixxx A pretty good story .. only a few spelling mistakes, but good! Nice story!
Posted by Romit Best story. Good.
Posted by bonquisha Kay den
Posted by dev gud
Posted by Anonymous lolwut
Posted by Harry Jay Extremely badly written. Has no one ever taught you how to punctuate? It's a revolting story anyway. Give me the young "flat chested" girls in the shower room anyday!
Posted by Budaaa Ni mbaya mbofu.