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Best time ever! reviews
Posted by Jackie
First of all, it is Maslows Theory - Abraham Maslow's Hierarchy of Needs. It is quite interesting if you actually read about it. Self - Actualization is very useful today.
Second of all, your story is not a story at all. It was too short, had no development whatsoever and lacked taste. Things like this i like to call - garbage.
Third of all, you have no sense of paragraphing and punctuation. Care about writing, then do it.
Posted by Liz
ummm... well not to be as killer as our own SuperHonesty Jackie, but i gotta say your grammer sucked, and your story isn't developed. not my thing, but hey- you got a nice idea. Not particularly my thing but not to bad to whack off to... or do a lesbian girly-whack (whatever the fuck that word i just made up is). As i said, not my thing. Jackie, we love you anyway :)
Posted by ac
hey mate, a tip on writing lesbian porn-
don't use male terms.
we are not men, and i for one do not like being thought of as a man. i mean, most butch lesbians do have a few male tendincies, like my own obsession with pulling things apart and then fixing them, but, most of us don't like having male labels posted on us.
and another tip- don't use big fancy words unless you understand what they mean.
and one more- make your story readable. PARAGRAPH!
and about 200 more i can't be stuffed writing down.
Posted by ACE
dont listen to these idiots they are allllllllllllllll dumb. see im writing like a moron a i dont care i liked it tho.HOLLA!
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