Posted by Hotfire This was a rock hard story I could relate to!! Had a cousin and her lover
Posted by Jack Mehoff Are you a 4 year old? Cause that is who it seems it was written by. You and your story sucks!!!!!!!
Posted by W decent story.I enjoyed it.keep it up.
Posted by Lucouarm Forget about part 2. Instead, look over part one with a grammar book in the other hand. This was a good story idea, but you need to write better and organize it.
Posted by Horney I agree. It was a good idea, but you need to work on you writting skills. It does seem like a young child wrote it.