Posted by jackie it was a nice story, but needs some work. Better spacing of paragraphs and more dialouge could of spiced things up a bit. Try spending a little more time on it. You'd be amazed what a little effort and proofreading can do for you.
Posted by Nina Extremely Sexy!!!! I'm a lesbian and I have fucked my plump best friend and it was great so the story gave me interesing memories