Posted by Nauseated Fiction is fiction, but you need serious psychiatric help. i suggest that nobody else dignify this story with a review.
Posted by JAMES MARTIN YOU DON'T COUNT ASSHOLE
Posted by James Martin The nauseated psychotic man ate the girls cunt and wished he were sucking a prick instead. He hated James Martin's straight stories.
Posted by Jess You need help!,
and nauseated person dous count!
what kinda writter are u if u cant take critasism about your work, THIS IS WHY THEY HAVE A REVIEW SECTION!
not a 'if u like this story review sectoin'
neway enough of review sections i feel slightly sick after that,and im sure i speak for meny other people.
ADVISE:
1.learn to take critisism
2.chose a story that will not make people sick
3.and last but definatly the most important
DONT WRITE
have a nice evening!
Posted by coisty you are some kind of sicko to bring kids into a story like that
Posted by J.E. MARTIN LOL - WHAT HAVE YOU WRITTEN?
Posted by You must have fell from the stupid tree and hit every stupid branch on the way down.... Writing NOTHING would have been much better than the stupid shit you write about geezus...get some fucking help moron
Posted by moe u soo need to rot in hell that is some fucked up shit dude i dont even have words i dont know if the first page or the second was worse. get help really man u need it bad
Posted by Were u dropped on your head, or were you just fucking born that way dude that is fucked up, i hope to fuck u do not put a second part of that fucked up nasty ass story out, god that is disquisting. I dont have a problem with lesbian porn but when someone writes about children and them raping and molesting each other i have a fucking problem with that, I hope u rot in hell u sick fuck, and while you are on this world and in this life go see a fucking physicalagest cause that is just sick and wrong. PLEASE DONT FUCKING WRITE ANYTHING ELSE
Posted by SARAH THAT IS SO DISGUSTIN
Posted by that is the must disguesting thing i have ever written that has to be the worst thing i've read. please get some fucking help. i can write better lesbian porn cause that is fucked up. please dude get some fucking help for your fucked up head cause you must have fallen off "the fucked up in the head tree and hit every fuckin branch on the way down" so please get some fucking help and i hope you rot in hell mother fucker. SOMEONE PLEASE REMOVE THIS FUCKED UP STORY
Posted by (none) I haven't even read this story yet but i have to say these revues are scaring me, i'll read it anyway.
Posted by (non) Excuse me while i go throw up.
That was the most disgusting thing i have ever read in my entire life, your sick.
Posted by sickboy Ive read some sick stufff in my life butt you need help I hope you dont have kidds you freak
Posted by FUK YOU ASS! GET A FUKIN LIFE.... I WAS MOLESTED MY WHOLE LIFE AND FOR YOU TO MAKE IT INTO A JOKEIS A RATHER COLD HESRTED THING TO DO!! I HOPE YOU BURN IN HELL BITCH!!
Posted by Hannah this is a fucked up story and it was disgusting and this person that wrote, needs help
Posted by scum dog please learn to use spell check and get a grammer dictionary other than that I jacked off to this story many times.
Diana grabbed Louise’s head hard and raised her ass up of the chair and yelled: “Suck it Louise! Suck my pussy baby girl! Oh yes! Like that just like that! Oh god I’m going to cum!”