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Posted by Someone who can spell
Learn to spell! You must be an AOLuser. It's break, not brake.
Posted by jo
i dont know where to began ,not only was the horribal
it was poorly no very poorly writen . did u take any time to think about what u wrote at all and the suject i like porn stories that was not porn that was vommit
nope sorry
try again
Posted by anne
no offense but i got bored reading the first paragraph, you should learn to spell and use grammar... and second of all, are you writing this in first person or third person? cuz first you're like sarah is a blah blah blah and then you go i'm a tall blond 18 year old whatever. you're only confusing ppl, not getting them horny. can you write at all? remember...always try try again.
Posted by angie
this really sucked. learn how to write. are you trying for first person or third? chose one and stick with it
Posted by JOHN & R
as much as I like to stick up for you
guys this story isnt worthy of our time
Posted by stone
Just about the worst story I have ever read!!!! Spelling, point of view and story line are all very poorly thought out. You really need to get your story straight! Who are you supposed to be? Are you the man or the woman? Anyways besides all this grammatical stuff I could not finish your story! Try again and then proof read your story to make some sense!
Posted by lou
WHAT THE FUCK?
Justin D. Willis, does your mommy know that you are looking at an adult sight. Does she know that her child, who's in middle school, don't know how to spell or properly use words in a sentence. Focus on school, get an education, then maybe you can revise this story so that it could make sense.
School Justin, focus on school!
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