The twins reviews

Sorry, this story just does not cut it as an incest tale. It is more of a freak show, and an improbabl one at that. Then there are the spelling, grammar, etc problems... Try to clean things up for the next part.

Personally, the freak show thing I liked. It was just waaay too short and nondescript. View some of the top submitters for incest if you want to have a really good story.

this was pretty awful, it coulda been good, if you woulda put some time into it, not just: "Hey! lets fuck!" "Ok!" I think you outta go back to the drawing board for your next story.