The twins reviews
Sorry, this story just does not cut it as an incest tale. It is more of a freak show, and an improbabl one at that. Then there are the spelling, grammar, etc problems... Try to clean things up for the next part.
Personally, the freak show thing I liked. It was just waaay too short and nondescript. View some of the top submitters for incest if you want to have a really good story.
this was pretty awful, it coulda been good, if you woulda put some time into it, not just: "Hey! lets fuck!" "Ok!" I think you outta go back to the drawing board for your next story.
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With no one around to hear her, Jennifer Boyle screamed with pleasure as her vagina was being assaulted by the battering ram attached to Jim's crotch! "Oh, god," she moaned, "you do that so fucking well, you're giving your First Lady a presidential fucking!!!"... |
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